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[Orangebat Episode 1]

Looks like it could be decent but....

This is my personal opinion but i reckon it would be better if you did a few things:

1. Remove the beak/arrow thing when they talk. It ruins the looks of the characters in my opinion.
2. Flip the wings(?) of the bat. They look like they are coming from it's rear.
3. Remove the background on the images (of the pigs and squirrels.) If the normal bats weren't drawn to a nice looking standard i would of thought it was a no effort job flash.

I shall give it a 6/10 as it has potential to be something nice. But needs more work for the next episode.

Cascadia responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

I am quite fond of the beaks however.

[Beef Jerky Boxers]

wow... wasnt expecting that..

gotta say it is quite amusing yet i saw something i shouldnt so ill only say 6/10

.... i am now mentally scarred o.O'

JunkYardAnimations responds:

hahaha i expected much worse comments but i like these ones! glad i shocked you lol

[Something in a Box]

for a first flash, this is great!

if this wasnt your first flash id give it a 1 maybe 2 tops /5 but seeing as it is your first flash your probably not as good as the guys that hit top 50 all the time soo yea great job man! 4/5 for you and hope you continue with your work!

hint: try shading like using a darker colour on edges. it makes it not look like it was done in paint.

Tillerian responds:

Shading: In the process! Making my characters look better as I type! I know what you mean about the pain thing. I will get better! Promise! And the backgrounds will be better, too!